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However, I really have similar feelings as Gidgegary do. I think it sounds wierd, and hypocritical, if i may say so...Do not just pretend to be 'polite' but keep making an effort to making yourself look 'cautious', 'prudent', and 'well-mannered'.
Revised:
That should be "However, I have feelings similar to Gidgegary's. I think it sounds weird, and hypocritical, if I may say so...Do not pretend to be 'polite' while making an effort to make yourself look 'cautious', 'prudent', and 'well-mannered'."
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